Elevator Pitch 2

In this elevator pitch I did not introduce myself and say my name as I was watching the lecture Professor Pryor said not to do that and start with something meant to grab your attention first. I created a scenario instead of talking about myself, like I did in the other one. I also got feedback that my app is the same as Uber or Lyft but I made sure to make the distinction that it is not because it is actually free and it is only for student use. I think that feedback was important because it shows me that I have to be very careful when explaining my app and to distinct it from competitors.