I did not receive any feedback on my second pitch except that my tone was good and that I spoke at a good pace. So I tried to replicate my tone and speed in this pitch again. I am really starting to memorize the pitch and get more comfortable with it and I think you can really tell from this video because it does not look like I am reading from anything
Friday, March 29, 2019
Elevator Pitch 3
I did not receive any feedback on my second pitch except that my tone was good and that I spoke at a good pace. So I tried to replicate my tone and speed in this pitch again. I am really starting to memorize the pitch and get more comfortable with it and I think you can really tell from this video because it does not look like I am reading from anything
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Final Reflection
1. The most formative experience was when I first came up with the ADVcarpool idea, it was like a light bulb lit...
Hi Nicole,
ReplyDeleteI love that your business idea for rides are from college students who have undergone a background check! Safety is key! With that said, your pitch was really good, and you are confident in your presentation. Confidence is also key to sell your product. Confidence is something I have to work on in my pitches! Since you know the material that well, you may be able to record it without the notes. There is a free editing tool on YouTube where you can cut out parts you don’t like and blend it in to the next section in case you have two or three short recordings where the best parts are spread out.
Hey Nicole, this app seems like a great idea. I think it's a great thing to try out here in Gainesville because it's such a small town and most of the students at UF aren't from around here. Your pitch was well put together, and you provided some good examples- maybe one too many. I think you should spend a little more time on the buisness aspect of the buisness, and work on the energy you put into it.
ReplyDeleteHi Nicole, I think that you maintained a great tone and speed in this elevator pitch and you were really able to convey your passion for your offering in this. I think it's great that you were able to make it look like you weren't reading from a script, and it seems like you have refined your idea enough to make people want it!
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